“Bight” by Elizabeth Bishop is quite successful in
its description of place since it uses a good amount of devices and plenty of
imagery to give the reader a clear understanding of the setting or place. “White
crumbling ribs of marl protrude and glare” is a good line in the sense that referring
to a “rib of marl” is a unique choice of wording, since ribs of the marl is
irrelevant, but perhaps allows the reader to visualize much better what the
text is describing. “Blue-gray shark tails are hung up to dry for the Chinese-restaurant
trade” is also a good line since the reference to a Chinese restaurant trade
does not make much sense or is illogical when referring to a ship harbor,
however it allows the reader to relate more to the text since they are receiving
an outside the box comparison.
James Wright uses similar poetic techniques in his
work “In Response to a Rumor That he Oldest Whorehouse, in Wheeling, West
Virginia, Has Been Condemned” Wright uses illusions to forests, lakes, ponds,
and other wildlife places to describe a deadly or “wild” city. “Upstream from
the sewer main” the reader can imagine a combination of settings of both a
concrete jungle like city, or an actual wildlife setting. Wright also describes
the women walking the streets in the story as “Swinging their purses, the women
poured down the long street to the river and into the river.” The women are
written as being similar beings in spirit to swans or maybe ducks, that travel
the waters or streets together. “What time near dawn did they climb up the
other shore, drying their wings?” The mention of drying their wings can be an
illusion to preparing themselves for another grueling day in the city. Wright
uses these devices as a sort of metaphor, except it extends throughout the
entire work.
I also liked both Elizabeth Bishop's and James Wright's works. Both use imagery to emphasize the specific feeling being in the places described (especially Wright), and it works out quite well.
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